Date: 2015-09-20 04:50 pm (UTC)
plaguedoc: (Default)
From: [personal profile] plaguedoc
I enjoyed this a lot, but I do get why you say it may reveal too much. Maybe try 3rd person instead of 1st person perspective? Easier to reveal too much of a character's motivations in 1st person.
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting
 
Notice: This account is set to log the IP addresses of everyone who comments.
Links will be displayed as unclickable URLs to help prevent spam.

Profile

jezebelinhell: (Default)
jezebelinhell

May 2025

S M T W T F S
    123
4 5678910
11121314151617
18192021222324
25262728293031

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jul. 20th, 2025 03:48 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios